Date: Tue, 19 Feb 2013 18:58:53 -0500 (EST) From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> To: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r41010 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors Message-ID: <alpine.GSO.1.10.1302191856400.9389@multics.mit.edu> In-Reply-To: <20130219221651.GB15736@saturn> References: <201302181954.r1IJsLmd095109@svn.freebsd.org> <alpine.GSO.1.10.1302181557570.9389@multics.mit.edu> <20130219221651.GB15736@saturn>
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On Tue, 19 Feb 2013, Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > On 2013-02-18 16:01, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> wrote: >> On Mon, 18 Feb 2013, Eitan Adler wrote: >>> Author: eadler >>> Date: Mon Feb 18 19:54:21 2013 >>> New Revision: 41010 >>> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41010 >>> >>> Log: >>> While cvsup is deprecated, as long as it is documented and working, >>> don't document bogus, ancient, or useless parts. >>> >>> Approved by: bcr (mentor) >>> >>> Modified: >>> head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml >>> >>> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.xml >>> - <para>With this very useful feature, those users who are on >>> + <para>With this very feature, those users who are on >> >> Do we care more that it is this particular feature or that it is a >> useful feature? ("With this very ..." does not seem particularly >> consistent with our style.) > > 'With this very feature' can be understood also as 'with this specific > feature' or 'with precisely this feature', so it's syntactically > correct. It _is_ a bit confusing though as a diff/change, so I'd > probably prefer the simpler 'With this feature' too. That's what I was trying to say, sorry if it was unclear. The committed fix seems acceptable. -Ben
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