Date: Thu, 21 Feb 2013 17:41:56 -0700 (MST) From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com> To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, Dru Lavigne <dru@freebsd.org>, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r41024 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users Message-ID: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1302211739010.91219@wonkity.com> In-Reply-To: <alpine.GSO.1.10.1302211348170.9389@multics.mit.edu> References: <201302211406.r1LE66bl041470@svn.freebsd.org> <alpine.GSO.1.10.1302211348170.9389@multics.mit.edu>
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On Thu, 21 Feb 2013, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > On Thu, 21 Feb 2013, Dru Lavigne wrote: > >> @@ -700,11 +683,9 @@ passwd: done</screen> >> <secondary>quotas</secondary> >> </indexterm> >> <indexterm><primary>disk quotas</primary></indexterm> >> - <para>Disk quotas limit disk usage to users, and >> - they >> - provide a way to quickly check that usage without >> - calculating it every time. Quotas are discussed in <xref >> - linkend="quotas"/>.</para> >> + <para>Disk quotas limit disk usage to users and provide a way to >> + quickly check that usage without calculating it every time. > > This sentence is still not quite there. > Maybe "Disk quotas limit the disk usage available to users" or "limit the > disk usage of users"? "Disk quotas limit the amount of disk space available to users" >> + Quotas are discussed in <link linkend="quotas"></link>.</para> Is that the right way to do that? <link></link> should be around some text to make a hyperlink. <xref> generates the text, like Chapter 21. (I think.)
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