Date: Fri, 10 Feb 2006 10:16:37 -0600 From: Ben Kaduk <minimarmot@gmail.com> To: Daniel Gerzo <danger@rulez.sk> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org, Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> Subject: Re: Re[2]: docs/93014: minor nits in the project model book (dev-model) Message-ID: <47d0403c0602100816y6f15451coeb1f0e375339d883@mail.gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <1942942743.20060210164259@rulez.sk> References: <200602101530.k1AFUEtr095055@freefall.freebsd.org> <1942942743.20060210164259@rulez.sk>
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On 2/10/06, Daniel Gerzo <danger@rulez.sk> wrote: > > Halo Giorgos, > > Friday, February 10, 2006, 4:30:14 PM, si tukal: > > > The following reply was made to PR docs/93014; it has been noted by > GNATS. > > > From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> > > To: Ben Kaduk <minimarmot@gmail.com> > > Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org > > Subject: Re: docs/93014: minor nits in the project model book > (dev-model) > > Date: Fri, 10 Feb 2006 17:23:52 +0200 > > > On 2006-02-08 03:56, Ben Kaduk <minimarmot@gmail.com> wrote: > >> In the project model book, I found a few minor nits whilst perusing > >> its contents. > >> > >> One nit is the use of "to" instead of "too" on line 2209 of the source= . > > > >> >Fix: > >> --- book.sgml Wed Feb 8 02:38:24 2006 > >> +++ book.sgml.orig Wed Feb 8 02:38:08 2006 > >> @@ -2206,7 +2206,7 @@ > >> stability cannot be sacrificed by self-imposed > deadlines and > >> target release dates. > >> > >> - For slips of time not to become too long with > regards to security > >> + For slips of time not to become to long with > regards to security > >> and stability issues, > >> extra discipline is required when committing > changes to -STABLE. > > > > Hmmm, not really. The original text is ok. "too long" refers to the > > length of a time period. I'm not sure what "to long" would mean here. > > > > looks okay to me too. I guess I should apologize -- I made this diff hastily, and put the arguments in the wrong order -- the original text has "to long," I am proposing to change it to "too long". Unless I'm misunderstanding you= , here. Ben Kaduk -- > Cheers, > Daniel Gerzo > > _______________________________________________ > freebsd-doc@freebsd.org mailing list > http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-doc > To unsubscribe, send any mail to "freebsd-doc-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" >
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