Date: Wed, 04 Mar 1998 16:19:16 -0700 From: Sean Kelly <kelly@plutotech.com> To: Greg Lehey <grog@lemis.com> Cc: FreeBSD Documenters <doc@FreeBSD.ORG> Subject: Re: Graphics in handbook? What do you think? Message-ID: <34FDE174.6ACF8428@plutotech.com> References: <19980227114815.57531@freebie.lemis.com> <34F6E001.D09568D8@plutotech.com> <19980228132125.15343@freebie.lemis.com>
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> Tell me what you think now. I like it. I think I'd find a way to make "Communicator" instead of "windowMenuLite" appear in the menubar. Someone's X resources might be screwed up. One other possible source for confusion might be the term "image". Before the screenshot, the paragraph refers to the floppy boot image; after the shot, there's a remark about what to do if your browser doesn't support images. A discussion of images does come later, but maybe too late? Maybe you want to call the pictures in the browser "icons" instead. A few grammatical nits: * "XF86331 is ... It's strongly recommended to install it." Howabout: "It's strongly recommended that you install it." * "games contains ... Don't exepct any great things from this distribution." Add: "especially now that boggle is gone." :-) Otherwise, it looks great, and it should help cut down on those pesky questions asking "uh, what file do I download?" --Sean To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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