Date: Thu, 11 Feb 1999 16:30:16 +0900 (JST) From: kuma@nk.rim.or.jp To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: docs/10020: typos in isdnd.8 Message-ID: <199902110741.QAA16311@mail.nk.rim.or.jp>
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>Number: 10020 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Some typos?! in isdnd.8 manpages in 3.0-19980209-SNAP >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Wed Feb 10 23:50:01 PST 1999 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Norihiro Kumagai >Release: 3.0-19980209-SNAP >Organization: FreeBSD Japanese Manual Translate Project (jpman) >Environment: manpages in 3.0-19980209-SNAP >Description: 1) In paragraph 3 in "INCOMING CALLS", I have found a strange description: "the kernel signals the then active connection by ..." I guess "the then" might be "the"?! 2) the description, DISCONNECT_REQ, DISCONNECT_IND should be I4D_DISCONNECT_REQ, MSG_DISCONNECT_IND, respectively, I guess, because these words represent macro names defined in <machine/i4b_ioctl.h>. >How-To-Repeat: (none) >Fix: Please examine the following patch if it is worth to adopt. --- isdnd-us.8-org Thu Feb 11 01:42:44 1999 +++ isdnd-us.8 Thu Feb 11 16:20:55 1999 @@ -277,11 +277,11 @@ .Pp The call is terminated by either the local site timing out or the remote side hanging up the connection or the local side actively sending a -.Em DISCONNECT_REQ +.Em I4B_DISCONNECT_REQ ioctl message, both events are signaled to the .Nm by the kernel sending the -.Em DISCONNECT_IND +.Em MSG_DISCONNECT_IND message and the CDID corresponding to the call is no longer valid. .Pp .Ss INCOMING CALLS @@ -299,18 +299,18 @@ .Em I4B_CONNECT_RESP ioctl message with the appropriate parameters to the kernel. .Pp -In case the daemon decided to accept the message, the kernel signal the then +In case the daemon decided to accept the message, the kernel signal the active connection by sending a .Em MSG_CONNECT_ACTIVE_IND message to the daemon. .Pp The call is terminated by either the local site timing out or the remote side hanging up the connection or the local side actively sending a -.Em DISCONNECT_REQ +.Em I4B_DISCONNECT_REQ ioctl message, both events are signaled to the .Nm by the kernel sending the -.Em DISCONNECT_IND +.Em MSG_DISCONNECT_IND message and the CDID corresponding to the call is no longer valid. .Pp >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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