Date: Wed, 6 Mar 2002 19:26:10 +0200 From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@ceid.upatras.gr> To: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/35098: [PATCH] Handbook NFS stuff Message-ID: <20020306172610.GD11735@hades.hell.gr> In-Reply-To: <200203052340.g25Ne2R93047@freefall.freebsd.org> References: <200203052340.g25Ne2R93047@freefall.freebsd.org>
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> - <para>Have several machines on a network and share a CDROM or
> - floppy drive among them. This is cheaper and often more
> - convenient.</para>
> + <para>Set several machines to share a CDROM or
> + other media among them. This is cheaper and often
> + a more convenient method to install software on multiple machines.</para>
"This is a cheaper and often"
^
> + <para>On large networks, it might be more convenient to configure a
> + central <acronym>NFS</acronym> server in which to store all the user
> + home directories. These home directories can then be exported to
> + the network so that users would always have the same home directory,
> + regardless of which workstation they log in to.</para>
These home directories can ... network. This way, the users will ...
I find the use of 'can' and 'would' a bit awkward here.
But we're nitpicking on this patch for quite a while now. IMHO, if nobody
else has any objections, I'd like to see this go in. Minor mistakes can be
corrected if and when they're found, later on. It looks pretty good now.
Giorgos Keramidas FreeBSD Documentation Project
keramida@{freebsd.org,ceid.upatras.gr} http://www.FreeBSD.org/docproj/
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