Date: Tue, 20 Apr 2021 18:31:28 +0000 From: Daniel Stevenson <daniel@dstev.net> To: Chris Hill <chris@monochrome.org> Cc: Joe Smith <joeinwap@gmail.com>, freebsd-questions@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Typo in asmctl(1) Message-ID: <V11EJUNAZ2mlCIh_XhCsLaugwIrq5uWiF4DWIid65zIg-5XOSfwir30h2JRHbljupNOsb0dE8PEqQozZ8X1S-BE2ECEYidGfeZpqj_SnEpo=@dstev.net> In-Reply-To: <alpine.BSF.2.20.2104201205540.44891@tripel.monochrome.org> References: <CA%2BPLHcHvrETQwNyC5eoXfQLL%2B%2Bzwu_j12oz0ByeNbbE2cPK8Uw@mail.gmail.com> <alpine.BSF.2.20.2104201205540.44891@tripel.monochrome.org>
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On Tuesday, April 20th, 2021 at 11:12, Chris Hill <chris@monochrome.org> wr= ote: > On Mon, 19 Apr 2021, Joe Smith wrote: > > In > > https://www.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=3Dasmctl&sektion=3D1&apropos= =3D0&manpath=3DFreeBSD+12.2-RELEASE+and+Ports > > it says > > > > *video* *down* > > LCD backlight less dark. > > > > That should be either "LCD backlight less bright" or "LCD backlight dar= ken". > > Of those two phrases, the former reads better IMHO. And as long as we're > looking at this, I imagine "key down" needs the same change. And > REQUIERMENT should be REQUIREMENTS. And the line after, which begins > with "following," could benefit from an initial "the." I've submitted a pull request upstream with some suggested changes. https://github.com/yuichiro-naito/asmctl/pull/13 -- Daniel Stevenson
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