Date: Tue, 29 Aug 2006 08:27:57 +0300 From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@ceid.upatras.gr> To: Daniel Gerzo <danger@rulez.sk> Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/93522: [patch] use rc.d script in example describing how to restart mountd in nework-servers chapter Message-ID: <20060829052757.GB11469@gothmog.pc> In-Reply-To: <1893310735.20060828110758@rulez.sk> References: <200602211640.k1LGe9UD002587@freefall.freebsd.org> <20060828054323.GC1411@gothmog.pc> <1893310735.20060828110758@rulez.sk>
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On 2006-08-28 11:07, Daniel Gerzo <danger@rulez.sk> wrote: > Hello Giorgos, > > Monday, August 28, 2006, 7:43:23 AM, you wrote: > > > I think it is better to use either "mountd must be ..." or "The mountd > > daemon must be...", but not what starts the newly added stuff above. > > > The order of the first sentence is slightly untasteful (the result > > (having to restart mountd) precedes its cause (a change in the > > /etc/exports file)). > > > The use of "it" is also a bit confusing. Does "it" refer to mountd or > > to the file? > > HEY, isn't this PR already closed? ;-)) Yes. I mailed out the comments when offline, and then found out (after I had network access again) that they were obsolete anyway. Sorry about that :)
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