Date: Tue, 02 Dec 2003 06:37:08 +0100 From: Christian Brueffer <chris@unixpages.org> To: Josef El-Rayes <j.el-rayes@daemon.li> Cc: FreeBSD-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Proposed addition to the mail section of the handbook Message-ID: <20031202053708.GC71732@unixpages.org> In-Reply-To: <20031201221825.GB10158@jenny.daemon.li> References: <3FCBB04F.7070204@potentialtech.com> <20031201221825.GB10158@jenny.daemon.li>
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--GPJrCs/72TxItFYR Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Mon, Dec 01, 2003 at 11:18:25PM +0100, Josef El-Rayes wrote: > Bill Moran <wmoran@potentialtech.com> wrote: > > In all seriousness, I'm not totally confident with docbook=20 > > yet, so suggestions > > on all levels are appreciated. (at least I got make to=20 > > stop complaining ;) >=20 > hy, i had a look at your patch and i have following suggestions: >=20 > line 27: &man.send-pr.1; which creates a link to the > send-pr manualpage. >=20 > line 45: the dot should not be inside the apostrophes. >=20 > line 48: Execute the following commands as root. <- shouldn't > this end with ':' instead of '.'? >=20 > line 47+48: mark ssmtp port up with > <filename role=3D"package">mail/ssmtp</filename> >=20 > line 51: i think it is common practice in the handbook > to propose "make install clean" for installations. >=20 > line 53: i would markup ssmtp with application tag >=20 > line 26+32: why is there a different identing? as far > as i can see, both lines are on same level. >=20 > line 56-60: what about indenting here? >=20 > line 71: s/ssmpt/ssmtp >=20 > line 72: it is "manpage" not "man page". >=20 Actually it is 'manual page'. - Christian --=20 Christian Brueffer chris@unixpages.org brueffer@FreeBSD.org GPG Key: http://people.freebsd.org/~brueffer/brueffer.key.asc GPG Fingerprint: A5C8 2099 19FF AACA F41B B29B 6C76 178C A0ED 982D --GPJrCs/72TxItFYR Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.2 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQE/zCUDbHYXjKDtmC0RAt5LAKDlYJuMHgbBOZT4+l4K+XXU7XFgygCcCZWg SnGdK0FseZa0ZJy4dTkQd2A= =Ut6n -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --GPJrCs/72TxItFYR--
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